The story of Dune and Code.

Wow a New story? and The first story at that? I love it! I have to say so far I love Code. Though we even haven't met Dune, I have my feelings. The two seem familiar, hmmm. Semi-realistic  I presume? (the story). Oh I love Code!

I must agree with Russetheart, Code is adorable! I love this short intro, and I can't wait to see Dunes! All I can say is..

Oh wow! Thanks for the positive feedback guys! Yes Russetheart, it is Semi-realistic. I'm glad you like Code! That has to be the cutest gif Yet Robsinshadow! I'll writ Dunes POV later. Again thanks for the positive feedback guys!

Raven POV

The black male watched around his pack, as they greeted and connected with each other. His closed his blue eyes. Though blue eyes were very rare in wolves, blue eyes were apart of the males heritage. He quickly walked over to the den, where the dominant female laid. He nuzzled her and then licked behind her ears. Three young pups ran around his legs rough housing and play fighting. Both dominant wolves sat watching the three pups played. The strongest was a close to lack furred male with pale blue eyes, the second one is a brown gray female coat with a darker blue,  the last one the weakest one was a dark gray male with baby blue eyes. The pups were born a while ago and were losing their  blue eyes, to a mix of ambers and yellows. The strongest one had his weaker brother pinned down as he bite on his ear,the weaker one yapped loudly and the other male pulled away. A younger wolf walked up to the two "lead" wolves tail low and head down. The black furred male met the wolf with a sharp nip on the side and a growl. Whining the weaker male didn't look the dominant wolves in the eyes. The dominant wolf growled at the wolf teeth bared, and the younger wolf padded away. The male wolf lifted his head and let out a long throaty howl, the other members of the pack joining in. The female nuzzled the other dominant male behind the ears, before he went to go follow a scent trail , following up to a moose herd. After a few hours the pack found the moose herd, after picking out  the weakest in the herd, a doe with a gash in her right flank and a limp. The bull male was a few feet away watching his herd carefully. Separating the pack of wolves circled around the herd, quietly stalking up to the weakest one staying away from the bull. After a while the wolves began the chase, a large and strong female wolf lunged for the does front to be kicked in a head leaving a large gash in her head. The wolf took no attention to this as he nipped the does heels. After about an hour the wolves took down the doe leaving about five behind either with hooves to the head and/or a large gash on their sides from when the bull charged. After eating the wolves treaded back home, as the got home they all greeted each other. The pups begged for food and the dominant male regurgitated some for the pups to eat, as they couldn't eat raw meat yet alone hunt. The male lied down and once gain watched as his pack moved around and greeted each other.


Just a little filler before I get on to dunes! Raven is a side character as you call it. I hope you like it!

I love the story so far!

Crowtalon; wrote:

I love the story so far!

Thanks!